It's been awhile Corky.
But I really do think this is your best movie so far. Much more plot/story line than your other submissions, better video quality than your other submissions, except for one part where you put the gun to Nick's head was great for the audio, and the humor really picked up in this one compared to your others.
I encourage you to keep making movies and keep improving like you have been. They seem to be getting better every time that you make one. Good job to you guys and keep up the great work.
Thanks. And it has been awhile. Your so busy all the time. :(
Wow, this is a great video! The comedic value and concept itself was funny. I like how you made those lasers, lol. They were a much better touch than just the using the sabers they sell. Good choice of music as far as Star Wars is concerned. The ending was the funniest though. Haha, the only problem is the video quality could've been better, it was a little laggy in some parts. But overall it was pretty kickass. Corny, but hilarious. ;) Now make MORE. Oh and Metal wtf, crappy preloader? MAH MAMA MADE THAT! And the replay button too?! Oh you guys just make me wanna cry :P I woulda beefed it up, buuuuuut someone wanted to get it out right away, lmao. Anyways, great job Corey.
Thanks man. Yeah, I honestly don't know what Metal was talking about. I thought everything you helped with was great. ;) I'll try to make more, but my friend does most of the editing and it takes him a long time so if we do make more it will be in awhile. Thanks for the review.
Sorry, but no.
I understand but, what were you planning to succeed here? Beat other crap flashes by getting Underdog? Well isn't that ironic. By doing that, you yourself have actually increased the chances of deserving flashes not getting this. This will not accomplish anything, The flash itself was pretty bad, just some music, text, and a screenshot of your flash. If you are serious about flash, make a good flash that will have a nice chance at a real award. This itself is spam, so your cause is now null and void. There are plenty of other ways to fight spammers, than become one in the process. Sorry if I seem harsh, but really. You can't beg people for low scores and high reviews by the way.
Great animations all!
Good to archive this for posterity. But does this mean you DO have something new planned for the front page?
Ok, first off the voices were much improved! The graphics were better for the most part. And it's all starting to unfold. The fighting scenes are a nice touch. Good to finally get some action. May I suggest when recording to do it in a semi-quiet area though, I can some background sounds in the voices. Haha, now I can't wait to see the next, kudos on the cliffhanger! Keep on putting in effort and improving, Gustavos! 8/10 4/5 Fav'd.
Well thanks Yoshi. I'll work hard on the next, which should come much quicker than this one. I'll try to get cleaner recordings and see if I can fit in another fight in episode 3.
I love the style of the people. Not to mention using a popular song! Nice little romantic short, haha. Loved the easter egg secret too LOL. Not much to improve, so... keep it up!
Well, personally they are good I guess. Despite being overrated, Through the Fire and Flames is the only song of theirs I know, LOL.
Now on to the flash. All of the sprites were nice as usual. Although I think you could work on the lip-synching a bit more. The part when the soldiers were commenting was hilarious! Before...AFTER! Heh, nice one Bahamut. TO 100!
What do YOU think of them?
I enjoy DragonForce, but I have to admit, they do have some flaws in their music. Their songs are quite repetive and their live performances are pretty terrible, but meh, what can you do about that? At the end of day, nobody's perfect. Also, yes, their lyrics are pretty bad, but they're just lyrics. They can't ruin the sound of the instruments. To me, the instruments are more important than the silliness of the lyrics on one song. But yeah, overall, I think they're pretty good.
Hmm not your best.
While I understand your mishap, this was not too good. Animation was choppy and I don't think I heard any sound may be just me. Anyways, I know you could've done better, it just looked rushed, which it was.
Yes it was. There was audio in it. But only i few pieces. I had a much better one but it was deleted. So i will remake it maybe in a couple months.
Not the best in the plot. Kinda boring actually, it's pretty much just him speaking. But the synching and voices made up for the lack of humor or depth to the movie. The graphics were pretty good and detailed for the most part but overall it was just a one way flash. Didn't really do anything for me.
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The animations and graphics were alright although could be better. As you said the sound is still a little cracky and breathy in some areas.At least it was synched. Maybe it's becuase I don't study Shakespeare but I didn't really get it and neither will the majority of Newgrounds. A bit random if nothing else. However it was pretty good FBF-ing. 7 Stars.
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