Score: 7

"A pretty humorous remake.."

submission: The Monkey's Paw

date: June 28, 2009

Ah yes, I remember reading this story in my English class awhile back...
Let's break this down.

Animation ~ 6/10

It reminded me a lot of Egoraptor's Awesome series, if you don't mind me saying so. By that I mean, crude yet fulfilling drawings. However, it seemed very choppy and rushed which I know it had to be. I kinda liked that style for this movie however.

Story ~ 8/10

A classic story about the morals of wishing. Good choice.

Voices/Soundtrack ~ 7/10

Some nice selections for soundtrack on your part. The scream part is also a class act. Good voice acting. Although the quality wasn't the best, your voice was quite clear for the most part.

Additional Comments: A decent remake of the original story, although you never finished it. You could have wrapped it up by him wishing everything back to normal. The ending seemed abrupt. Keep on improving and making nice parodies of such stories.

Overall Score: 7/10

~Sispri~

Score: 10

"It's been awhile Corky."

submission: The Pretenders

date: May 19, 2009

But I really do think this is your best movie so far. Much more plot/story line than your other submissions, better video quality than your other submissions, except for one part where you put the gun to Nick's head was great for the audio, and the humor really picked up in this one compared to your others.

I encourage you to keep making movies and keep improving like you have been. They seem to be getting better every time that you make one. Good job to you guys and keep up the great work.

Score: 10

"Very nice!"

submission: Being a Helpful NG'er

date: August 26, 2008

A very helpful flash for new users and regulars alike!

Graphics 6/10- Nothing to rave about here. Very basic, but at the same time, full of simplicity.

Music 7/10- A classic tune, if nothing else. Maybe next time have a music bar! You know have a bunch of songs? It'll offer alot more selection. ;)

Content 10/10- Ah, the main meat of the flash was very well explained and detailed. Going into alot of groups that help Newgrounds. Very informative here. Perhaps explain other concepts such as whistle points, B/Ping, depositing. But then again, that could all be seen in the FAQ.

Anyways, nice flash work guys! :D

-Yoshi77777

Score: 3

"Ehh.. :/"

submission: Tactical RPG - Warfare

date: August 23, 2008

Nah, the ads were too long. I was able to keep them in a tab until the ads ended. 3 hours is WAY too long. At least have a preloader and a box for them next time. Anyways, the gameplay was not too good, I mean the graphics were good though. Just a little boring. I must give props to Filsoft for the kicking soundtrack though. It's an alright RTS when you get past the whole ads part. Hopefully next time you won't need too many ads.

Score: 10

"Aww, isn't that sweet!"

submission: Natasha Lovell

date: August 16, 2008

Indeed a nice flash for your gf. Happy Aniversary! Music choice seemed to fit very well in this. Heh, I liked the little people on the bottom. :P Good flash work man. You too Nick. <3

Score: 10

"Very helpful, you two!"

submission: Abusive Review Guide 2

date: July 30, 2008

I loved it. It was very useful to new users and had a bunch of info about them. You have pretty much all the rules, examples, and instances that could possibly ever involve abusive reviews! Graphically, it was not the best, the same beam backgrounds. But, it doesn't matter for the most part. The music choice was a nice touch. Good thing you didn't use the FDA Handbag Loop. It's way overused in Newgrounds related flash. You guys are great at making tutorials for Newgrounds. Maybe consider a "How-to-Review" guide next. Heh, either way, nice job, RTB and Corky.

-yoshi77777

Score: 10

"Impressive!"

submission: Hay Wars

date: July 15, 2008

Wow, this is a great video! The comedic value and concept itself was funny. I like how you made those lasers, lol. They were a much better touch than just the using the sabers they sell. Good choice of music as far as Star Wars is concerned. The ending was the funniest though. Haha, the only problem is the video quality could've been better, it was a little laggy in some parts. But overall it was pretty kickass. Corny, but hilarious. ;) Now make MORE. Oh and Metal wtf, crappy preloader? MAH MAMA MADE THAT! And the replay button too?! Oh you guys just make me wanna cry :P I woulda beefed it up, buuuuuut someone wanted to get it out right away, lmao. Anyways, great job Corey.

Score: 1

"Sorry, but no."

submission: -A Cry for Help 2-

date: July 9, 2008

I understand but, what were you planning to succeed here? Beat other crap flashes by getting Underdog? Well isn't that ironic. By doing that, you yourself have actually increased the chances of deserving flashes not getting this. This will not accomplish anything, The flash itself was pretty bad, just some music, text, and a screenshot of your flash. If you are serious about flash, make a good flash that will have a nice chance at a real award. This itself is spam, so your cause is now null and void. There are plenty of other ways to fight spammers, than become one in the process. Sorry if I seem harsh, but really. You can't beg people for low scores and high reviews by the way.

Score: 10

"Great animations all!"

submission: Bytesize

date: July 1, 2008

Good to archive this for posterity. But does this mean you DO have something new planned for the front page?

Score: 8

"Much improved!"

submission: Nintendo Story ep 2

date: June 28, 2008

Ok, first off the voices were much improved! The graphics were better for the most part. And it's all starting to unfold. The fighting scenes are a nice touch. Good to finally get some action. May I suggest when recording to do it in a semi-quiet area though, I can some background sounds in the voices. Haha, now I can't wait to see the next, kudos on the cliffhanger! Keep on putting in effort and improving, Gustavos! 8/10 4/5 Fav'd.